Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Wednesday, 14 February 2018

How to prevent yourself from getting sick

4 ways to prevent yourself from getting sick
Introduction.1. Some ways to prevent yourself from getting sick The first way is before you you eat something that has already been open or left for a while but hasn't been open make sure to smell it before you eat it cause it can be rotten. For example I left some chicken in the fridge and I forgot about it for one week. Than when I find it and eat some I will start to get sick. Also make sure to check the expiry date.

Paragraph.2. The Second thing is don't overheat. So when you overheat your body temperature rises which forces the blood flow to your skin. And that it puts a strain on the heart and that is capable of producing large amounts of sweet which can cause dehydration witch put further strain to the heart.

Paragraph.3. The third way is Stay Hydrated. DId you know that your body is 65 to 70 percent water so if you are dehydrated your body does not function properly water keeps your body healthy and eliminates toxins and once the water in your body is reduced you need to refill it cause since that there is sugar in your body sugar is acid without water to eliminate it and will make you feel sick.

Paragraph. And finally The fourth one it don’t get too cold. When you get to cold you get Hypothermia what Hypothermia does to you is it could kill you it will make your body numb and it will stop the blood from flowing in you body which will make you pale. Which will start to stop the heart.

Conclusion. Thank you for reading what I have created to help you to know things that help you from staying sick. Please leave a comment on my blog and tell me what other things that can prevent yourself from getting sick.

Tuesday, 2 May 2017

Arthur Immersion Assembly

Today at Immersion Assembly our school found out that our school topic is “Now that’s thinking”. In our school there are teams there is Team 1-5. Where team 4 the best team in the school.

As i said that our school topic is Now that’s thinking.Team 1-3 is learning about kite’s and some extra things. The xtra this is about Manaiakalani and other movies and Presentations.Team 5 is learning about fixing things and how to make their space better. We also saw Mr Burt talk about how google has done a lot of things for us and he showed our school all of the computers we had in the past all thanks to google.

Team 4’s topic was about thinking into the past and thinking about what kind of Technology did the Maori use befor Pakeha came to New Zealand. This is quite interesting cause our Team created a movie and it’s quite interesting.
Our teachers were sitting in the library and thinking about what we are going to learn about so they looked through books and saw a lot of olden day stuff. So they thought about what did the Maori use be for Pakeha came to New Zealand. About 250 years ago the teachers was amazed what kind of things that they found in the book. Back in the day there phones and to connect to the WI-FI and it made a terrible so

I hope we learn more about Technology and coding and how to use robots. Mr somevie told us that we might make our own Technology and use robot’s and sphero. I am also hoping that before Pakeha came ‘to New Zealand what did the Maori’s eat and how did they cook their food.

What I think about the new term is cool I think that we are going to do awesome stuff. I hope next term will be even better.

I hope you enjoyed please leave a comment.

Walt: using exciting language.

Task description: We are learning to get better and writing

Monday, 10 October 2016

My Holiday Part 1

My Holiday

On Thursday the 22nd of September 2016 me and my brother and my Dad went up north and it was a long drive nearly about 5 hours and on the way there there was a forest that we had to go through and i got sick so after i was sick be for i was sick we had to pull over first and after i was sick i went to the boot and grabbed some Tic Tacs banana flavoured YUMMY!!!

Then all after that the trip was AWESOME!! Leave a comment and i will do Part 2.

Friday, 16 September 2016

The life of Usain bolt

Usain Bolt started running since August the 21 1986. Which means he has been practicing running ever since he was a kid. When he was a kid he was good at running but now he is the fastest person in the world.

In his first race in the olympics he came last and he was very upset but the next race his mother helped him and gave him confidence. Then all the races after that he has been coming first.

Thursday, 15 September 2016

Arthur Writing - Narrative September 2016

Once upon a time there was two little kids and one adult the father there names were Joe Moe Kyle Kyle was the adult and the kids father and they loved kayaking in the creek they will almost go kayaking every day. Then one day they they desaied to do something different they wanted to go swimming in the creek so they put on some flippers and some scuba diving goggles and some boxers. Joe found something in the creek It was shiny So just before Kyle win into the water Joe said “I found something” then Kyle said “what is it”. Joe said “i don’t know it was shining”. So Kyle and Joe went back into the water and pull out whatever was shining then they noticed it was a treasure chest so they bring it up to shore and was looking for Moe in the creek so they found Moe and they were going to open the chest together.

When They opened the chest something bad happened a whole lot of smoke came out of the chest. When the smoke cleared out there was a note and a lot of gold and rubies and diamonds and all sorts of jules. Well back to the note it said “who dares to open this chest will suffer with pain and face the consequences” so the kids were scared with horror. Moe and Joe told the adult aka father that is a bad idea the dad said “ Naa whoever put this pile of goodies down there is just trying to scare whoever opens this chest just so we can’t have it. So the kids and father bought the chest inside the house and then the dad of the two kids said “it’s getting late so why don’t we go to bed ok said the kids.

The next day the dad was gone and the kids were looking for him so when they went back into the dad's room to check if he was there they saw a ghost and said “i told you not to open the chest and now your father is suffering if you don’t put that chest back into the creek you will probably never see your father again. So they sent of to get the chest and put it back into the creek to get there father back. After they done that they went back to the ghost and said “we put it back into the water and now can we have hour dad back” the ghost said “yes but next time you do that again something worse  is going to happen. So they looked outside and there he was. The end

I hope you enjoyed my story leave a comment please.
Walt: write a narrative
Walt: demonstrate understanding of a number of strategies and skills for writing (for example, use of paragraphs, a range of sentence types, descriptive language, punctuation, spelling).

Wednesday, 25 May 2016

Will he save her?

The Amazing Spiderman 2


Peter Parker/Spider Man had a friend called Harry he was Peter’s best friend and Peter’s girlfriend's name is Gwen. The villain named green goblin named harry peters friend and the other villain his name is Electro. Spider man uses his web to stop Electro but he underestimated him the power in Electro zapped the web and electrocuted spider man.

There is a battery in Electro so Spider man thourt that if you overcharge a battery it will explode so spider man grabbed some cables and put is on electro and he overcharged exploded.

Gwen went to spider man and then the green goblin showed up and took Gwen on top of a building and dropped her spider man was so so angry so spider man chased after Gwen and used his web and is was to late her head hit the ground to hard but spider man did cached her but is was to late she passed on to a better place. Spider man so so angry at harry and he fought him and in the next 30 minutes he was in jail and the life just went on for Peter.

Tuesday, 17 November 2015

My Weekend


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Saturday 14th 2015

In my weekend I went with my dad to little shell bay. My dad is the yard captain of little shell bay he is in charge of the boat's. Me and my dad went to little shell bay to do some work on some boat’s there was a lot of work to do.

First what I did was helped my dad put the diesel into the bulldozer. The bulldozer need’s 100 litres but we did not need a full tank. So we only put like 40 litres in the bulldozer because that will be a nuff for a couple boats to hall out.

When the tide went out there was a hole heap of leaves and seaweed and a hole heap of stuff. Then a dog came and got a stick so I picked the stick up and through the stick the dog ran to it but did not bring it back. The dog just chewed on the stick and went away then I was making a mountain out of that stuff in the water it felt weird.

Then the black dog came a digged the mountain to look for something to eat. Every time I put the stuff on top on the mountain it will dig and dig and dig and dig it was annoying. It keep on going and then I asked if we can go and so we did.


My best part about my weekend was when i went with my dad to little shell bay.I hoped you enjoyed my weekend.

Tuesday, 27 October 2015

Egg friend race

Friend egg race

On wednesday the 21st my teacher got us to do a really weird thing. It was an egg race. Mr baxendine gave his class an egg and I got one to.

I was wondering what was going on and what are we doing with this egg. Mr baxendine gave us a vivid I asked Mr baxendine what do we do. Then he said draw a face on it then i said why and  then he said you will know when you do it.

I was waiting for ages just to get a vivid mine was ugly as all there was was a bit of hair and a penguin nose and a mouth connected to the nose. Then i said i don’t want it so i gave it to atareta.

Then we walked out of the classroom and walked to the park i was wondering what are we doing here at the park  then mr baxendine got out the spoons of the plastic bag  then he said we are doing a egg race.

I asked atareta if i can have the egg back. I was the last group to do the race mine had a hole in it before we did the race mr baxendine told me to empty some of his brains out instead i tipped all of his brains out.

The egg race started my egg was on the spoon. Mine had a hole in it so it was difficult. Well it was kind of easy I have to go over a few obstacles. I dropped it on one of the obstacles so I put it back on it was difficult at times because it keeps on dropping. I lost so when I go to the end mine was cracked how about this I put it in a graveyard the graveyard was the terrifying bin.

We walked back to class wiel going back to class then i got a drink and went to class. I hope you enjoyed my egg race.

Thursday, 15 October 2015

My holidays


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Title: My holidays with my Nana.


On Tuesday the 6 of October 2015  it was holidays. My nana  picked me up from my home so that I can stay the night at my her house.

On the way to my nana's house my nana thought that we can go and play at cornwall park. But the park was so so small. So we walked around the place then we saw a exercise park. We went on that for about 2 minutes then we kept on walking. Then we saw a pond and inside that pond there was ten ducklings and one duck. I just wanted to grab one of them and keep them. They were so so so cute but there was a fence blocking them so I couldn't grab them.

After that we saw a path and then we walked the path. The path was called pamua bacen. It was three kilometers me and my nana talked about a lot of stuff. We walked the whole way round and I learnt some stuff. When we were at the bridge me and my nana picked some flowers and throw it into the river to see how fast the river is going it was going so fast.

When we finished the walked we went back to car and we drove about another 1 kilometer and then we were there at my nana’s house. After we parked the car in the garage we had a nice refreshing drink. I hoped you enjoyed my holiday. My favorite thing about the day is that i went for the walk.

The End

Wednesday, 23 September 2015

Thursday, 17 September 2015

The bull chase and The cocodile

There was a man that was going into the sea but a bull was chasing the man the man was terrified. He thought that he would not make it so he ran as fast as he can. He tried to run away all the people that we around him was looking at the bull and was thinking that if the man he would make it.
There is a man inside a boat and a crocodile is trying to sink his boat so the crocodile can eat him.

Thursday, 20 August 2015

TRADE FAIR

On the 16th of August 2015 team 4. Had a trade fair at point england school we got to get 15 minutes each to sell and buy. We all had a buddy and we swished i was first and my buddy was second my buddy got the most time instead he got at least half an hour.

To buy we did not have to pay real money we paid pts in is a poker chip but with a hole in the middle. The blue one it 1 pt and the green one is 2 pt. The white one is 50 pieces and the red one is 20 pieces i had 3 pt and 81 pieces. The business that i am in is the musical instruments me and me and my buddy got into the group and we don’t get to pick our we had to do a page about what you want to do you can do molecule instruments and homeware and cooking and toys and deirkeranntrateing.

The trade fair was like a market but it only like has 150 people in it we used our classes to sell as well we were selling and buying. I bought 1 shing shoot and 2 crossbow the 2 crossbow

Monday, 20 July 2015

Thursday, 18 June 2015

Dolphin and cow

Once upon a time a farmer was going to milk a cow and he saw that the cow wasn't there. So he went to look for the cow so the first place he went to was the park because he cow like playing but the cow wasn’t there he look the cow wasn’t there. The last place he looked was the beach the cow was there swimming with a dolphin so the farmer went to go and gone the dolphin and the cow swimming.

After the swim the farmer went back with the cow to the farm and the farmer milked the cow so the farmer has some milk for his breakfast. After the farmer’s breakfast the cow and the farmer went for a walk and saw some beautiful things.

They saw red flowers and roses and they went home. Had some lunch then watch some tv. Then it was dinner time they had yummy yummy stuff like a pie with some catsup and for pudding they had a pavlova then they went to sleep.

Wednesday, 27 May 2015

Jack and the beenstalk

On Sunday at 11:00 in the morning some beans went into our garden and gure a beanstalk. Jack and his mum was very very pour. So we had to sell our cow because it was the only thing that we could sell.


A giant has found us run away run away thea thae tho them i smell a human i am going to eat you up. Hi ginent i am going to stop you from eating all these people so get prepared. Tell me when you are ready don't look up rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr perch i have dishonored you then one of the people some hero.


The beanstalk landed on my house and it did lots of damage. The builders are going to fix my house up so it is better to live in. My brother's are a bit scared because the giant landed on our house and my mum and dad are a bit surprised that the had jemes all over him.


My mother was very very angry so she went to go and get some fresh air. When she comes back i am going to make her eat the beans so she can turn into a beanstalk because i hate my mum. Jack hope she suffers and has a heart attack and die.


Then the next day jack and his mother was rich. So thea went to a new house with rich people. They lived happily ever after and never got poor again.
When jack and his mother wear at the rich place they decided that they can go back to their old house and get some people to take back to the rich places so jack and his mother can have happened with his son and his next door naber. Also that jack can have some fun with the kids so they can do stuff like playing ball and playing cars and maybe goto rabozend to go on the roller coaster and bumper bots and last the bumper cars. When they come back from robozend they so they can do some more funny stuff like going to the movies and watch the new spongebob movie when they come back from the movies it will be dark so they can go to bed.

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Then the next morning jack and his friends go and start to go and do a aventina and try to find bigfoot and try and find ufos and meisterernst stuff like bugs maybe try to find a tralantera and when jack and his friends come back from the aventina they can tell there mother what they found. After they can have some morning tea then they can do bumper cars and crash into each other and they wear having fun. Then they went to go have some lunch they had for lunch some chicken and some juice.

Tuesday, 12 May 2015

Creative Paragraphs- Man In Space

This week we have been learning to rework our writing to make our paragraphs interesting for our audience. We started by writing a creative sentence about this picture. As a class we will choose Nate's sentence because we liked it the best and wrote a paragraph each to follow the chosen sentence. Here is the beginning of my story that starts with Nate's sentence.
A spaceman bravely walks out into the icy milkyway. The milky way is a galese that looks like milk. The milky way is a big galese that is looks like a black hole but just with a milky colour.

A black hole is like a dimension. A dimension is a sucking death machine. If anything goes in to the black hole it will get creached and suked up to peaces.

The preacher in the black hole is so so hie that if anything goes in it and i mean anything that goes in the black hole it will be creached and suked up to peaces. If you go in the black hole apostle everything in your body will be shredded. Apostle nathank in the universe has ever gotten out of a black hole.

Nathank in the universe has gone thero a black hole because it will creached you to pieces. If enthink went thero a black hole you will need the thickest rocket in the world to get past a black hole. If you go i a black hole in the other side you will only see space and crashed stuff like a ship a suns galeses everything that went into a black hole that is what you will see but carshed.

You will only see crashed stuff because the preacher in the black hole takes more preacher than the space. There will be also milky ways in the black hole. You might even take some pictures inside the black hole.

Tuesday, 28 April 2015

anzac day

In the assembly we had a anzac assembly to celebrate anzac day. We were celebrating anzac day because we are not, going to school on monday. We were talking about the first world  it happened in samoa.

We were all so talking about how many people were on the ships. There were 8000 on each ship. There were about 15 ships so about 120000 people went to the war.

It was the beast anzac assembly that i have had in my hole life! It tort me lots and lots and lots of thinks about the first world war.

We watch a short video of the first world war. I felt really happy i new haw anzac day gos. What will the next anzac day be like?.

Wednesday, 22 April 2015

My holidays

In the holiday Me, Eric, Connor and my Aunt, went to the movies. I saw the new Sponge Bob movie. I think Morpheus went to the movies as well.

I went to the movies because it was a lovely day. We got a large bowl of popcorn. We were going to get a extra large of popcorn.

The popcorn was very yummy. The flavor was solte and sergur i ate ,most of it. But i had to leave my Birthers some and my Aunt.

The Spongebob movie was super super cool. It was about a magical book that makes Spongebob go places. Spongebob wrote in the magical book that he would get so so so strong! And he did. Spongebob also had a bubble, blower on his head.

At the end we went to my Nanas House. Then I told my Nana it was so so fun ! You should've come. I wonder where we will go next?

Tuesday, 31 March 2015

What is easter

What is easter
people have  different beliefs in easter. Some people think is is about bunnies, easter, eggs, food, when Jesus Christ was resurrected and some people don’t celebrate.


Easter eggs
The jermens thourt that the earth was hatched by a egg. For easter the jermens got eggs and dipped the eggs inside the paint. They didn't eat the eggs they salabert.

In the 19th century the christians started to celebrate easter as well. There ferret colors are spring colors. They celebrate it because it is about Jesus Christ and heaven.

Easter sunday On sunday it is easter the beast bit of easter for me is that i get carollo easter eggs. It is so so so! fun. I wonder what i will get next year for a easter eggs.

Thursday, 26 March 2015

oamaru creek

My animation is about oamaru creek. Omaru creek is a creek that has living things like boatmen, eels, and ducks. Omaru creek is near Point England. Omaru is important because, we are trying to keep the creek clean.

The trees help the fish stay cool by making shade. If the trees were not there the fish would cook. The trees help keep the mud out of the water by holding it with its roots. This makes the water cleaner so the fish can see properly.

There is a thing that stops the rubbish from going further down the creek. On the other side of the collector the creek is flowing water. Then the water flows for the rest of the creek. To keep the creek clean you can stop putting rubbish inside the creek.

I hope you’ve learnt how to keep the creek clean by not putting rubbish inside it.